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Writing 4 — Homework 1 · Đáp án

Bài 1 — Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và viết Topic sentence

Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và viết Topic sentence cho các đoạn văn sau

1.
_____. Factories, through manufacturing processes and energy production, emit harmfully gases into the atmosphere. These emissions contributes to air pollution and increase the rate of climate change. Additionally, daily human activities generate excessive waste pollute land and water systems. Improper disposal of plastics, chemicals, and other non-biodegradable material contaminate soil and groundwater, posing risks to ecosystems and human health.
Đáp án gợi ý:

It is crucial to acknowledge the problems human activities can cause to the environment. Factories, through manufacturing processes and energy production, emit harmful gases into the atmosphere. These emissions contribute to air pollution and increase the rate of climate change. Additionally, daily human activities generate excessive waste that pollutes land and water systems. Improper disposal of plastics, chemicals, and other non-biodegradable materials contaminates soil and groundwater, posing risks to ecosystems and human health.

Lỗi tính từ, trạng từ:
  • harmfully → harmful: bổ nghĩa cho gases
Lỗi mạo từ:
  • material → materials: nói chung chung, danh từ đếm được để số nhiều
Lỗi mệnh đề quan hệ:
  • excessive waste pollute → excessive waste that pollutes
Lỗi chia động từ (S-V agreement):
  • contributes → contributes: chủ ngữ “emissions” số nhiều
  • pollute → pollutes: chia theo “excessive waste”
  • contaminate → contaminates: chủ ngữ “disposal” không đếm được
2.
_____. More and more individuals rely on cars instead of walking, have fewer physical demands at work and prefer inactive leisure activity. This result in burning less calories and gaining weight. Moreover, the problem is worsened by the growing number of people eat irregularly and consume large portions of high-calorie food. In doing so, they are more likely to damage their metabolism.
Đáp án gợi ý:

There are several reasons for the increasing number of overweight people. More and more individuals rely on cars instead of walking, have fewer physical demands at work and prefer inactive leisure activities. This results in burning less calories and gaining weight. Moreover, the problem is worsened by the growing number of people who eat irregularly and consume large portions of high-calorie food. In doing so, they are more likely to damage their metabolism.

Lỗi mạo từ:
  • activity → activities: nói chung chung, danh từ đếm được dùng số nhiều
Lỗi mệnh đề quan hệ:
  • eat → who eat
Lỗi chia động từ (S-V agreement):
  • result → results: chủ ngữ “this” số ít
3.
_____. Firstly, homework which does not always equal to improve educational outcomes. For example, in Finland, where school children are not given the homework, regularly top international educational league tables and outperform nations where setting homework is the norm. Secondly, it is recognised that play time is just as beneficially as study time from the perspective of brain development. Doing homework can take away precious time and energy that could be spent on pastimes activities.
Đáp án gợi ý:

Homework can be an unnecessary burden on children. Firstly, homework does not always equal to improve educational outcomes. For example, in Finland, where school children are not given homework, their students regularly top international educational league tables and outperform nations where setting homework is the norm. Secondly, it is recognised that play time is just as beneficial as study time from the perspective of brain development. Doing homework can take away precious time and energy that could be spent on pastimes activities.

Lỗi tính từ, trạng từ:
  • beneficially → beneficial: bổ nghĩa cho play time
Lỗi mạo từ:
  • the homework → homework: nói chung chung, danh từ không đếm được
Lỗi cấu trúc câu (mệnh đề quan hệ):
  • homework which does not → homework does not: nếu dùng mđqh thì câu này chưa có vị ngữ
  • their students: câu này thiếu chủ ngữ
4.
_____. Firstly, a balanced classroom can break outdated stereotypes about what subjects is suited for each gender. By seeing women excel in engineering or men thrive in literature, these biases weaken, allowing students to pursue their genuine passions without the societal pressure. Secondly, it would foster a diversity of thought and avoid an overlook of one gender’s perspective. Leads to a more comprehensive understanding of any subject, ultimately benefiting all students.
Đáp án gợi ý:

I believe universities should strive to attain equal gender distribution across all subjects. Firstly, a balanced classroom can break outdated stereotypes about what subjects are suited for each gender. By seeing women excel in engineering or men thrive in literature, these biases weaken, allowing students to pursue their genuine passions without societal pressure. Secondly, it would foster a diversity of thought and avoid an overlook of one gender’s perspective. This leads to a more comprehensive understanding of any subject, ultimately benefiting all students.

Lỗi chia động từ (S-V agreement):
  • is → are: chủ ngữ “subjects” số nhiều
Lỗi mạo từ:
  • the societal pressure → societal pressure: đang nói chung chung thì không dùng the, danh từ không đếm được nên giữ nguyên
Lỗi cấu trúc câu (mệnh đề quan hệ):
  • Leads to… → This leads to: câu gốc chưa có chủ ngữ

Bài 2 — Viết đoạn

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